Go GREEN!! This is a great partnership, as we are proud alumni!
I do agree with the other comments, “Flights in Michigan” could be reworded to make sure the flights are not from one Michigan location to another location in Michigan.
Hi! I do FB ads for a living. This ad is pretty good, but the description reads awkwardly. I’d reword as “Over Xx subscribers in Michigan. Save on your next flight today!”
Thank you so much for taking the time to comment. I’m still not convinced FB ads are really effective, but this will be a really interesting project. Excited to see what they come up with over the course of a couple months.
Good luck on college students reading anything on Facebook! But I know some things can push to both platforms at the same time. I like the layout and beachy visual (a likely destination for college students) but maybe instead of Flight deals IN Michigan, it should be FROM Michigan? I guess that's implied with the visual, but the wording gave me pause a bit.
Go GREEN!! This is a great partnership, as we are proud alumni!
I do agree with the other comments, “Flights in Michigan” could be reworded to make sure the flights are not from one Michigan location to another location in Michigan.
Thanks so much for taking the time to comment. I agree with your suggestion and we’ll get it cleaned up for the next one!
This is great! Son is a ball player at MSU. Happy for the kids there to get this experience (and maybe bring travel opportunities their way!)
Thanks for commenting. We just took our young family over for a MSU women's basketball game and had a great time. What does your son play?
Sam plays baseball! Season is starting soon!
You’ll have a busy spring, but I bet that is a ton of fun!!
An interesting idea, for you and for the students. Hope it works out well and brings you lots more subscribers.
Thank you very much. Excited to see what they come up with!
Hi! I do FB ads for a living. This ad is pretty good, but the description reads awkwardly. I’d reword as “Over Xx subscribers in Michigan. Save on your next flight today!”
Thank you so much for taking the time to comment. I’m still not convinced FB ads are really effective, but this will be a really interesting project. Excited to see what they come up with over the course of a couple months.
Love the picture; it says vacation to me. I don’t love the font; it doesn’t match the vision and it looks cheap.
Good luck on college students reading anything on Facebook! But I know some things can push to both platforms at the same time. I like the layout and beachy visual (a likely destination for college students) but maybe instead of Flight deals IN Michigan, it should be FROM Michigan? I guess that's implied with the visual, but the wording gave me pause a bit.